Cliche Leads

Cliché Leads

Clichés
are defined as trite expressions. There are also, however, ways of
beginning a sentence that are so overused that they’ve also become
clichéed. I admit, as a fiction writer, I have been –and am– guilty of
using some of these. I adapted the leads from submissions by Dich
Thien, a member of the American Copy Editors Society, or ACES.

• The ‘He leaned back in his chair’ lead: Jack leaned back in his chair and smirked. Gotcha, he thought.
• The that’s good, that’s bad lead: The good news was that he was still alive. The bad news was that he wasn’t sure how long he’d stay that way.
• The unrelated Zimmerman lead:
  Lucy stared at the red shoes on the shelf with envy. She opened her
  purse, took out lipstick, cell phone, a couple of crumpled tissues, the
  lint-covered card of her massotherapist before she found her wallet at
  the bottom. She wondered if she had enough money to buy the red shoes.
• The ‘that’s what’ lead: Fran wasn’t going to the ball. That’s what she told herself while she went through her closet for an appropriate gown.
• The ‘thanks to’ lead: Thanks to the bottle of Tequila he’d polished last night, Marcus had the mother of a headache this morning.
• The go-look-it-up lead: In 1958, when Jack entered high school, John Diefenbaker had already been Prime Minister of Canada for a year.
• The one-word lead: Sarcasm. That’s what Julie hated most.
• The word lead: Sarcastic was the only word Julie found to describe Steve.
• The ‘typical’ lead: Steve might talk like a typical redneck, but he was hiding the heart of a renaissance man.

Writer beware. That’s what I’d like to leave you with.

These leads are so tempting.

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